Confidential Variation (No Platter)

[TheMisdirectingHand]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=22hfpyDuz6k&fmt=18

What do you think? Feedback is appreciated. :)

[la0o9]

first of all, it's "patter", not "platter", second, it was good, but you need more work

[MarkoViner]

Yeah I wondered what plattered meant :D I like the idea behind it and everything, my only suggestion I could give you is to practice more.

[TheMisdirectingHand]

Oops, that's a typo, my mistake ahaha... I meant to type 'patter', I feel lousy now.

[Kieran Oloughlin]

Good job.